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DJ-Again...Again by Eemari

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I really really love this -i saw it on your other account but didn't wright a critic.

In comparison to your old artwork you definitely have a much better understanding of color/lighting and anatomy than in your old one.

This is also line-less and it looks very good line-less too!

The only 'negative' things i could say is that you could of added sparkles and clutter to the back ground (but that would of taken away from the focus of the picture) Its just a picky thing that would vary person to person and doesn't really matter ouo like really this is a really good picture

I think adding textures to the equipment the girl is mixing on would be a nice touch (that's more of a preference too, most people probably wouldn't care)

One fault is that a backwards quarter note? or a flat without a hole? XDDDD
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Eemari Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha, thank you for the critique, nightfrog :)

That backwards quarter note, by the way, is something that was intentionally done. It's a part of her character. I definitely know what quarter notes look like normally, as I've played piano for over a decade now, lol. But it's impressive that you even noticed that really. xD

Thanks again for the review!
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T0XICFR0G Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
np! :)

Ohh! I see! I didn't know you played anything that's cool! owo

no probs ouo
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