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Per Caelum by vitellan

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First off, i loveeeeee this so much man, its really epic! I'm jealous bro of your skills.
The way you used yellow colors and everything! The focus on the dragon and the ship is really good.

Now, what is bothering me with this picture is the dragons hind legs, i only see one i think and it looks weird Vs the rest of the dragons detailedness. ( you can ignore the rest of this critic from here ass I'm trying to meat the 100 word minimum)

I cant say any thing bad about the ship its really good.

The rocks look nice too, i am having a problem understanding towards the right in the back It looks kinda like a waterfall but it could be just a canyon type thing (its not really notice able, its just that I've been looking at this picture for a while while criticizing.
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vitellan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
You totally called me out on both counts. :XD: Thanks for looking closely at this and letting me know what was wrong!

I have edited the painting in an attempt to address both of the issues you mentioned. I didn't have a clear idea for the background (waterfall or not) so I just made it a difference in depth now and pushed the mountain/rock face on the right to be further away than the one on the left. Please let me know if the changes work~
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T0XICFR0G Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh I checked your gallery out I really like your art!! (watched you) x33

Awesome! you changed it! (no one i ever critic ever changes their work xD
Looks good!! C:
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vitellan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Thanks for the watch! :)
I think usually artists don't edit their work after critique because by then they're tired of that piece and just want to keep those things in mind for their next work... at least, that's why I might not do it. :XD: But all critique does help.
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T0XICFR0G Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np!!

yush, that does seem pretty reasonable!

Yay!!! helping!
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